November 4

Elaborated Sentences

Boring Sentence:The girl planted flowers.

My Sentence: The petite and stunning girl planted 25 ferocious loud snapping flowers.

Boring Sentence: The fish swam in the sea.

My new sentence: The enormous fish swam through the freezing cold saltwater.


Posted 11/04/2013 by Caleb in category Uncategorized

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